I've just updated my module, fixing a couple mistakes spotted by the masked delver and a few I spotted myself. I also tried to clean up some layout issues. Most importantly, I added a page at the end giving my halfbaked chargen rules, including the random xp chart that calithena called "brutally OD&D".
The download is still available at the same place: Under Xylarthen's Tower.
UPDATE: I just uploaded a hopefully final version of the module. Turns out I forgot to embed the dang fonts! I wish I had discovered this before I took the file to Kinkos and had them print me a copy. Oh, well.
writing process part 2 - when i write i'm absent i'm somewhere that only exists as a nonexistence an away place like i'm with death it is a good place it is where i came from...